尊敬的老师:
您好!
我叫__,今年__,是来自__省__高级中学的一名高三学生。感谢您能在百忙中抽出时间看完我的留学申请书。
贵校有着悠久的历史,深厚的文化底蕴,丰富的教学资源,良好的学术氛围,为社会培养出许多杰出人才,有许多专业是在国内名列前茅。我的许多师哥师姐都不约而同的选择贵校为第一志愿。我也渴望能在明年夏天拿到贵校的录取通知书,我期望成为贵校的一名学生,希望在贵校深造,渴望成为一名对社会、对祖国有用的人才,希望成为贵校光荣历史的见证人。我希望这次自主招生考试能够改变我的人生轨道,让我投入到贵校的怀抱,我希望被贵校录取。
我选择贵校,正是认为贵校既注重过程,又注重结果的人才培养方式。我认为我个人很适合在贵校接受教育。
我来自__高中理科实验班,在这个高手如林的班级中,我的学习成绩总能略占上风。这样的成绩,让我稳稳扎根于全校学习成绩前列中。事实上,我的潜力还很大,我的分数还有升值空间。我对问题的深入分析,对知识的熟练掌握并没有完全反映在我的卷面上。有很多时候,我的答案正确,但解题过程并没有被阅卷老师所理解。有时候,过程明晰,但结果却因一个微小的错误而与正确答案失之交臂。
令我颇为自豪的还有奥赛上的成绩。怎么说呢,成绩不是最好,但足以令我引以为荣。高一的时候,我就参加了化学竞赛,获得了市三等奖。当时我只是初试牛刀,小试身手。高二,开了生物课,对生物的兴趣使我毫不迟疑的参加竞赛班的学习,全心全意投入到“生物”的广阔海洋中去,其实,那时离市赛只有十多天,距省赛仅有半个月可以准备。我如饥似渴的仅用不到十天时间就把一本六百页厚的〈生物奥赛教程〉啃完,同时又做了几十张的习题。工夫不负有心人,我以__市市赛第二的身份进入省赛。为迎接省赛,我自学了大学生物课程,做了近五年的奥赛试题,每天忙到深夜,一大早又急急赶到学校图书馆。那个时候学校正开夏季运动会,运动员在赛场挥汗如雨,我在闷热的房间汗流浃背。我准备的很充足,踌躇满志,势在必得,我甚至夸下海口:“争省一,保省二”,现在看来,那时的我就像一把弓,无论精神上还是体力上都张的过满,连日的疲惫像洪水一样漫过了警戒线。结果,我没有把梦想带入现实,我以二分的差距与省二等奖无缘。我只得了省三等奖。当时我非常难过,为自己的付出而伤心,妈妈解劝我说:“这个努力的过程是一笔不小的人生财富。”现在看来,即使是省三等奖,在自主招生中不是也有很大的作用么?不是也帮助我向心仪的大学更靠近一步么?我觉得奥赛是我很难忘的一次经历,它让我知道了过程与结果同样重要。
我是学理科的,做事讲究有理有据,我不只是重视智商,在开发大脑智力资源的同时,我也非常注重情商的发展。我在高一的时候就担任数学课代表,那个时候我每天收、发作业,帮助老师完成教学任务。高二文理分班,又被同学们推举为生物课代表,在学习之余,我也经常帮助那些生物较弱的同学,给他们解释疑难题目,我因此受到同学们的欢迎,被多次评选为三好学生。我积极参加班级活动,曾编排历史剧《虎符》、《雷雨》,受到同学们热烈好评。在学校组织的辩论大赛中,我帮助本班六战全胜的不俗成绩,挂起了“第一名”的锦旗。
我对文学的爱好,让我的眼界更宽广,让我的思维更加广阔。我在省、市报刊发表过十多篇作文,在_网站有我好多文章。我想一棵大树,不管有多么大,它的根总是深深扎在大地里的。文学的根就深植于我国悠久的传统文化中。我喜欢〈西游记〉,尤爱〈三国演义〉,酷爱〈红楼梦〉。我爱〈三国演义〉就爱它的简爽干练,我喜欢〈红楼梦〉就爱它的温柔可人。我读到诸葛亮陨落五仗原,总有无限哀叹。我每次读到林黛玉临终前的那一幕,那竭尽全力的一句“宝玉,你-------”都忍不住替她接一句“宝玉,你好狠心。”然后心痛不已。我想,〈三国演义〉教会我用怀疑的眼光看问题,而〈红楼梦〉教会我用理想的眼光去解决问题。我用传统名著,在理想与现实之间构建统一的桥梁。
在我看来,高中生应该德、智、体、美全面发展,高中培养出来的不仅仅是拥有大量知识储备的“材”,更应该培养出的是能充分灵活运用自己知识储备的“人才”。我高中的标不仅仅是考入像贵校这样的名牌大学,以后衣食无忧。我的高中目标是成为一名有思想,有道德,有知识,有技能的全方位高素质人才。我想让自己投入到火一样的祖国现代化建设中去。我不想变成一个空有满腹经纶,却没有什么作为、碌碌一生的人。对我而言,贵校就是我心中的长城,我想,只有进入贵校,才能“英雄有用武之地”吧。期待您的认可!
此致
敬礼!
to whom it may concern:
i am vice-president of the institute of economics at the harbin universityof science and technology (hust), and i am writing to recommend miss. lv, one ofmy favorite students, to be admitted into your university as a candidate foryour undergraduate program.
i have known miss. lv since her sophomore year of college and acted as herthesis advisor mentor. as an academic advisor for her undergraduate study, iknow her more than two years and i am strikingly impressed by his performanceand personality. in my development economics class, she has proven to be atake-charge student who is able to successfully participate in any task. for hisexcellent academic performance, he won the third class scholarship in 20__. as ateam member of school, she won championship of freshmen-3+1-cup basketballmatch. her chase for extracurricular activities is not confined to sports, shealso won many awards in many art exhibitions, for example, their dance song anddance in the youth-hood won the second prize award in 20__ hust art show, andtheir group the excellent team in collecting folk songs by alumni. during theyears, as class monitor, she has strikingly manifested leadership ability byorganizing colorful activities and contacting with the school anduniversity.
i strongly believe her qualities combined with his toughness of characterwill enable him to be outstanding in the future. based on my observation, i deemmiss. lv as one of the most diligent and aggressive members of my students, shehas the openness to new field, people, and customs, which makes her fit wellwith any groups and the life in the coming future, besides, her ownirrepressible curiosity and an extraordinary ability to dealing with differentchallenges and situations. during the study at college, she is enthusiastic forevery major subject. with a assiduous and surefooted attitude and striving forexcellence, she has achieved each specialized course excellently, and inparticular, he has learnt a lot about japanese culture and history. i also takenote of miss. lv’ remarkable performance in academic research, and she graduatedwith honors in the top 10%. about all, she pay great attention to theadvancement of her comprehensive capability and energetically take part insocial practices. he is friendly to classmates and always ready to help others.i am quite satisfied with him.
i have confident that she will continue to acquire more achievement hisstudies. it is for these reasons above that i offer high recommendations letterfor miss. lv with no hesitation. i highly recommend miss. lv for graduateprogram and hope you will accept her admission to your university. i am reallyappreciate you for taking time to read this letter and looking forward tohearing from you at any time.
sincerely yours,
dr. wang zhonghua, professor, vice-president of the institute of economicsharbin university of science and technology
I am writing to express my full support for xiao xiao, who is applying tograduate school at [name of school]. though i am currently a visiting scholar atthe university of california, san diego, i was xiao's supervisor at the vvvuniversity school of architecture and civil engineering. in my [number] years inacademia, xiao stands out as one of the best students i've encountered.
as the professor in charge of vvv's student union, i spent several yearssupervising and working closely with pan, who served as the union's chairpersonand monitor. pan's work included managing the routine affairs of his class of 76students and planning many student activities. consequently, through our closecontact, i gained a thorough understanding of and respect for pan's character,his strong organizational skills, and his leadership ability. for example, infall 1997, xiao organized an evening party for incoming freshmen. i stillvividly remember the party's resounding success, as well as pan's unswervingattention to details.
dedication and passion are hallmarks of pan's character. although the workhe did as a student leader was time-consuming and tiring, he never complained.he simply embraced his responsibilities, and enjoyed the tasks at hand. studentsacknowledged his devotion to his classmates repeatedly: for four years in a row,the student body elected him monitor and chairperson. xiao felt great warmth notonly for his classmates, but also for society at large.
sincerely,
professor name
department of electrical engineering,
abc university
I am interested in the field of study of Organizational Behavior. In thepast, I have had the experience of working in settings where the people and thecorporate cultures of the companies were all different. I have found that thereis a great difference in the both the behaviors of people and of theirorganizations, depending on whether they are state-owned enterprises (SOEs),large multinational firms, or small to medium sized foreign enterprises. Onesimple example is that of the ability of an employee to act independentlywithout direct instructions from his or her boss. In many Chinese organizations,acting without direct instructions is considered a form of disrespect towardsthe supervisor, who is generally offended by such behavior. In my experience andresearch, such organizations tend to have low operating efficiency with theemployees losing their innate ability to take the initiative.
I am a person keen on thinking and experiencing. My lively character andvigorous energy have made me very active in extracurricular events in which Ihave sought an all-round personal development. Sociology Studies will provide mewith the kind of constant real life thinking I have always craved, while helpingme to improve my analytical, practical & communication skills. Also myconcern and curiosity about society and its people inspired me to pursue thissubject for my higher education, as I believe Sociology Studies sums up a lot inthe changing nature of society.
My education has schooling my perception of society and people leading meto be acutely aware of social events, inequality, identities, cultures andreligious fundamentalism, especially in a society such as the one I come from -China. I was practicing in the Chinese Hope Project during summer holidays andvolunteered to investigate the issue of low educational attendance rate forfemale students in rural China with my tutor from my high school and that was avery good experience as it not only made me realise how traditional culturalinfluence could remain unchanged in some of those rural areas in China and alsothe way parents and children interacting. I always have wondered why for manyChinese students just like me, hundreds of them fail to choose what they reallywant to student and do as a career. Chinese parents are definitely havingstrange influences on their kids' decision making in terms of education andcareer or in the worst cases; the parents decided what their kids should dosolely. My mother believes that I should go for Finance studies, while I clearlyknow that my interest has never been in the Mathematical formulas and numbers, Ialways find the diversities of societies, people, beliefs, cultures and the waypeople interacting together very fascinating. So, during this summer, mythoughts kept returning on why I worked so unsuccessfully towards studyingfinance and economics as my mother expected? And how can I truly become my ownmaster by progressing a BA that I really like to engage more research and enrichmyself with? How did all the cultural and beliefs affecting the way we actingthe roles in the community? In which way an individual could actually build upand refine his/her identities?
In pursuing a Sociology degree, I seek answers to these questions. Athorough examination of the Sociology behind human behaves could reveal thebeliefs,values and identities; it enables us to exam and understand ourselvesbetter. While knowledge of Sociology will certainly benefit the social servicesproviding, I also maintain a passion for Culture Studies for that same reason.Cultural behaviour study appeals to me because it tells us why we act in acertain way - under a cultural atmosphere. Also for being in the UK for 3 years,the knowledge about the outside world has given me a unique and balancedperspective to examine the reality of Chinese society too. In this historicalepoch in which China is becoming closely integrated into the internationalcommunity and playing an influence role in the world arena, I wish to gaininsights into our society in its socio-culture aspects and to study how Chineseculture can respond to the globalization process.
By combining these thoughts into a good BA in Sociology degree programme, Ican pursue my professional goal of doing education and community service workfor the government and perhaps focusing in promote public welfare. My experiencein the past in social practices has not only equipped me with an intellectualfoundation for my future studies but has also supplied me with my career plans.In my eyes, China's several thousand years of history has given rise to thedeep-entrenched rule by man instead of rule by law and nature. In dealing withsuch issues like economic development, poverty elimination and the promotion oflaw, the framing and application of government policies seem to play a greaterrole. Therefore, it is obvious that to contribute to public welfare and tonational development, it is more realistic and useful to become a well-trainedand well-qualified public administrator. In this lies the motivation of myapplication for an undergraduate programme in sociology at your esteemeddepartment.
WanSheng High School where I was studying is a key provincial high schoolthat attracts best students from every part of the province. In fierce academiccompetitions, I have managed to remain top-ten in my high school academicperformance and was recommended by the school to Highbury College,Portsmouth tostudy my foundation course. I passed the foundation course successfully in 20__and was an outstanding student of my class. I believe that my previous socialpractices activities and academic preparations have built a solid background forme to further my intensive and fruitful research in your BA in Sociologystudies. After gaining knowledge of both Sociology and different cultures at thehighly regarded University of Leicester, I plan to work for social services touse my knowledge of social human behaviour to aid members of the public.
尊敬的老师:
您好!
我叫__,今年18岁,____高三生。
在20_年秋季我参加了全国中学生的物理竞赛,获得了二等奖。由此我得到了参加_的资格。为此,我感到十分的意外和荣幸。经过考虑权衡之后,我选择了贵校作为我的奋斗目标。虽然面对未知的结果我忐忑不安,但我决定全力一试。
我是个从小通过书籍接受儒家道家文化熏陶的人,我待人以礼,也能做到诚实守信、热心集体。只是有时反而会因太重礼节而与人产生隔阂。有时缺少站出来的勇气。我正在努力改变自己。
学习上我一直能在班级排前十,成绩在全校属中上等。然而高考面前这却不是个理想的成绩。我的理科成绩较优秀——有时能达到全班第一,而文科却总是达不到自己的理想状态。我喜欢研究问题、难题,喜欢安静的琢磨事情,被老师评价为“想的和别人不一样的学生”。我不敢说自己是否优秀,但我自己是很享受这种与众不同的感觉的。
在课外,我兴趣广泛,在自主研究上还得到过比较令我自豪的成绩。我曾花一年的课余时间来制作一个游戏,该作品因其精巧而有创意曾受好评,只是因为缺少剧情而人气较低。在一年期间制作进程断断续续,程序构思使我绞尽脑汁,在玩游戏与做工程之间不断进行心理斗争。收集素材、算法、音频剪辑……每一步都十分用心。很多个第一次让我得到了不少经验。然后在终于完成的时候,那种喜悦也是不可替代的。我学会了一样很重要的事情,那就是坚持。
另一件让我获益匪浅的业余尝试是曲谱。因为很喜欢一段电视配乐,我尝试把它写成钢琴谱。我拥有业余电子琴五级证书,但这依然不容易。遇到瓶颈后,我求助于网上。然而有多少人会随便帮助陌生人做这种麻烦事呢?答案是零。于是我便下定决心,靠自己来完成。没想到经过自己的一番努力真的把它写成了!从中我明白了另一样重要的事,那就是自立自强。没人可以随便让你依靠。困难要自己克服才有意义。
所以有理由相信,虽然我于现在的只能做到中上成绩,但到大学去学习自己喜欢的,向往科目时我一定能做到最好。那时我会选择自己的事业,全身心投入去完成。相信我做到更好——也希望您可以相信。
我认为我最重要的优势是,我有时间——同所有人一样。我还有利用大学四年去改变自己、完成自己的机会。去争取它,那便是我现在在做的事了。希望贵校能给我实现自我的机会。期待您的认可!
此致
敬礼!
申请人:
__年__月__日
Cambridge University
The University of Edinburgh
UMIST
University of Newcastle Upon Tyne
University of Bath
I have always enjoyed studying Maths, Physics and Chemistry, and I wouldlike the opportunity to continue this study. Chemical Engineering appeals to mebecause of the challenges involved in the application of scientific theory topractical, real world problems such as how to deal with nuclear waste. Iparticularly look forward to studying fluid dynamics as I was introduced to thisduring the Engineering Education Scheme (EES). I am aware that in today’s worldchemical engineering has an increasingly important role across a wide range ofindustries from pharmaceuticals to petrochemicals. The broad range of careerpaths, and the opportunity to contribute to society through technologicalinnovation, is for me, one of the main attractions of chemical engineering.
I have applied to take part in the Year In Industry scheme during which Ihope to gain practical experience, as well as greater maturity enabling me to gointo my degree course with improved skills and broader experience. I also hopeto study e-learning courses on project management and presentation skills run bythe IChemE. In Year 12 I took part in the EES, which improved my understandingand skills in team working, time management, and report writing, as well asvisual and oral presentation. Throughout the course of the project the team hadto frequently correspond with mentors in industry and academia and thisexperience has broadened my appreciation of practice and application in a reallife situation. In July I attended a week-long ‘Into Engineering’ seminar run byREACT Engineering. Working in two teams, we were given a design exercise basedupon a typical decommissioning project. I also attended a Headstart course atNewcastle University, which I thoroughly enjoyed. One of the main activities wasto design, manufacture and test a small crane. I found both of these experiencesvery challenging, as we were given only limited time so we had to prioritise ourtasks and carefully plan our work.
This year a fellow student and I were awarded £500 by the EuropeanScholarship Prize to fund a visit to Prague to do research for our A-levelHistory coursework. I gained an understanding of the city’s culture and historyand further developed my independence. During the summer I represented my schoolon a Connexions review of a government white paper on 14-19 education. I gainedan insight into the government’s proposals and learned a lot about working withdifferent groups of people. Last year I was part of the editorial team for theschool magazine. I wrote a number of articles and I was responsible for ensuringthat staff contributions were ready for the deadline. I also enjoy participatingin a range of sports and have represented the school at football and cricket,which has further enhanced my team working skills.
In my spare time I am working towards my Duke of Edinburgh Gold Award. InSeptember I completed a 4-day expedition in the Lake District, which tested myendurance but gave me a great sense of achievement. As part of the award I havebeen helping at the local youth café once a week, which I am really enjoying asit gives me the chance to meet new people. I also enjoy reading, particularlybooks on physics and Russian history. I am really interested in computers and Iam currently trying to configure a Linux based file and print server for my homenetwork.
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